[Showcase] Kezra's Works

[KezraPlanes]

Since I didn' have anything else to do and I'm going to be pretty occupied the next few days, I decided to create a thread so everyone can give some feedback on my writing. And since there is a forum for showcasing graphical arts and none for this, I decided to create the topic here. If the mods decide to move it to a better fitting section, I would appriciate it.

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Prologue

First off is a prologue to a book I began writing put is now on the postponed list. It features a made-from-scratch mythology that took me over 6 months to create

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Background Story - Public

Secondly, I present to you the Lore I am currently creating for a Browser-MMO game called "Orion's Belt". It's still very much WIP and incomplete and with some incongruencies. Should you want to check the game out go to Orion's Belt : Free Tactical MMO Browser Game. Race selection text also is my creation.

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Enigma Game Studios: Interactive Storytelling - Articles: Creative Writing Assignment n

 

[eldiablov]

This is my kind of thread. Nice work Kezra, i'll get back to you with feedback shortly

 

[KezraPlanes]

Thanks man

 

[spike021]

This is great Kezra! I'll make sure to check these out sometime today and let you know what I think.

 

[KezraPlanes]

thanks I'll be waiting

 

[xploren]

Started reading, but on the first line of the prologue, there's a typo. "was nothing more than a lifeless rock with nothing do it". I'll get some feedback to you in a little while.

 

[KezraPlanes]

Thanks xploren... I'll fix the English when I have time

 

[xploren]

Thanks xploren... I'll fix the English when I have time

Haha, busy man.

 

[KezraPlanes]

I'm doing a translation work for English... bleh xD I need to present it too...