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Freestyle Poems, Short-stories and etc.

spike021

spike021

iPhone Developer (prev. PSP Dev)
Last night, Nimsical mentioned a poem done by him while he was on IRC. This gave me the idea to have a thread where you can post poems, or short-stories that you may have written whenever or at school for some assorted assignment.

Mine that I have written both for school and not are as listed below:


Here, there, parties of Life and Death were scattered about,
Lights flashing, cannons a blazing, smells fuming from the dust of the earth,
A hole in the ground swarming with Death,
Life only a thought in the depths of a memory

Bullets whizzing, the thumps of men being hit,
A stone
 
N

Nimsical

Hi, I'm Nima
Out of all the stuff I've written, two of them are my most favorite.
Only the first one was proof read, the second one (older) was written when I was in no condition to fix anything (although, I never wanted to change anything, anyway).

Explosion | Decryption of the Encrypted

Thoughts rambling, trembling around my head.

Thinking, going through every minute of every day. Thinking of life.

Questioning every moment, every prospect, every single fucking gesture of humanity.

Rationalizing all the known.

Fantasizing about the unknown, making sense of their twisted unmeasurable chance of existence.

For why do I hold the ability to think for others.

As if I was a human God, a holy leader of the human tribe.

For the living and the dead.

For all the meanings that are left to mend.

As if I had wicked rhymes and a tremendous amount of pride.

Only if I could smoke it up and become high, think free and just waste life.

There has to be a reason for my freaky piece, I forgot how it started at the very least.

Though if I could just collaborate with my disturbed witted mind, maybe someday I’ll enchant this realm and shape it into something fine.

Core of my Heart | Decryption of the Encrypted

At the core of my heart,
I can feel the pain as if it was a nerve; falling a part.

A reaction of my sorrow and misery,
as if I was a sad text in a blackberry.

A pathetic little bee,
just like the bug in the Ant called Zee.

The lonely successor of the failure king,
who is hoping to fly away with his imaginary wings.

I am a dead miserable person inside,
waiting for some miracle to shock me alive.

I am me and I will decide,
that if I’m going to be strong and put this aside.

Whether I fail to do what I think it is the best to do,
or I put my power towards my feelings so they’d be fulfilled.

I will live along with you; sitting beside,
I just hope we won’t randomly collide.

That if we do I will crash and if I survive,
then I will tell you how I felt all this long while.

I have a short story written too, but it's not fully readable yet.
I've written most of these for my own good, they're just a cure for my itch.
 
Moose

Moose

Meta Moose
Here's one by me:

Shocked that you aren’t feeling
What you probably should be
When pain hits you
A physical tense so overwhelming

A light that you don’t walk towards
This time you need the dark
A false attention of reflection
Through your mind you fly

One hand as the maker
Though the other interferes
Without moral consent
But with a truth lacking pain

No creator creates the end
The end creates him
A frequency that resonates
Through time and you

Wanting to control it
Will aid in its loss
Shaking the dice
Through no hands of your own

Pass advice like sand
You lose the meaning
As soon as it changes hand
Decide to play God
Dropping none but a grain

And another one:

A fold for one
Tear for another
Preach it to me
That I shouldn’t bother

Feel the need
To cover what you know
Claim you’re the heir
Mine has been taken

A tall man should stand high
How high can he stand
Without hitting his head on the ceiling

Ask me a question
Knowledge I will not gain
Do I stand tall or fall short
From feeling this pain
 
Freshmilk

Freshmilk

is Over 9000
Moose said:
Pass advice like sand
You lose the meaning
As soon as it changes hand
Decide to play God
Dropping none but a grain
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I've read quite a few of the poems posted, they're all really good. I just thought this verse of moose's was awesome, though. :tup:
 
Moose

Moose

Meta Moose
Freshmilk said:
I've read quite a few of the poems posted, they're all really good. I just thought this verse of moose's was awesome, though. :tup:
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Thanks. I write quite a lot when I am bored or angry. I'll post some more when I get home. :)
 
Moose

Moose

Meta Moose
Start from the bottom
And make your way to the top
Without a hand to help you
Or a voice for encouragement

Take the path that you need to
For want is only temporary
Without a hand to guide you
Decisions seem more important when
They are made by number one

Be found, not lost
And when you reach the end
Of that path, salute
But don’t adopt ignorance

Speak what you think
Without the need for a push
And take that path
But don’t rush

Grasp chance with hope
But don’t hope to fulfil it
Don’t hold it too hard
And always keep an eye on it

Be a soldier
But don’t take a life
And salute to the lost
But don’t adopt ignorance

Hold what you have close to you
As close as you possibly can
And remember to not forget
That you are the only one

No one else has anything to share? :(
 
Zx30

Zx30

Beto
A fine day it is to fish in the sea,

to find a woman who may take interest in me.

I toss in the line and steady I wait,

for that special woman I'd love to take on a date.


The bait I use is real; made of who I am inside,

so those that desire to be fake, will be gently pushed aside.

I desire a woman with a kind heart and a pretty smile.

So if you think your that woman, let me know and let's talk a while.


But until then I'll be sitting here waiting at sea,

for a woman to notice me and pull on my string.

Yes it's true, there may be plenty of fish in the sea,

but there must be one,waiting for a love as honest as me.

With no life or motion I stand alone,

wondering when she will return to me here at home.

Our last act together I'll surely miss,

it was her lips sharing with me a warm touching kiss.



It was then that her figure loomed through the door,

with a naughty smile hinting for more.

She bends over slightly and grabs me by neck,

in hope that we would once again surely connect.



To enhance the experience we moved to her bed,

where it would be more pleasing to suck on my head.

She opened her mouth and stuck me inside,

and thus begun our long wild ride.



Time passed by and my juice was free,

making its way home to her cheeks, tongue, and teeth.

But there was one problem she failed to foresee,

it was my load landing on her stain free sheets.



She pushes me aside and exits the room,

which leaves me feeling like an utter buffoon.

Now that I'm empty and all out of juice,

this bottle of coke has run all out of use.

Old ass poems I wrote. Not too great but there they are. I've noticed most of the poems here have deep meanings. Mine just rhyme lol.
I would read everyone's poems right now, but I don't have time T_T. I'll just leave you with these and I'll check back later.
 
spike021

spike021

iPhone Developer (prev. PSP Dev)
Zx30 said:
Old ass poems I wrote. Not too great but there they are. I've noticed most of the poems here have deep meanings. Mine just rhyme lol.
I would read everyone's poems right now, but I don't have time T_T. I'll just leave you with these and I'll check back later.
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Lol. I'm sorry but there is one major difference between your second one and mine at least. I don't mention the sexual intercourse. So that could be the reason :)

I like just writing about nature or stuff like that. Although...

Anyway, your first one was good though.
 
amrcidiot

amrcidiot

MFM Survivor
This is my band's webstie (Specifically the music section):
Limited Time Only

It has all of the lyrics that have been turned into songs.
A lot of the songs suck, but the lyrics are good.

Myself Lyrics
Limited Time Only
()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

When I touch myself I never wanna stop.
When I touch myself I think of sexy cops.
When I touch myself I never wanna stop
until my mom walks in on me and then I hang my head.

When I touch myself I never wanna stop.
When I touch myself I think of sexy cops.
When I touch myself I never wanna stop
until my mom walks in on me and then I hang my head.

Miss, please, can I ask you something?
What's it like being a porno model?
Do you get a lot of kicks being naked
in front of a very large crowd.
I know I would.

When I touch myself I never wanna stop.
When I touch myself I think of sexy cops.
When I touch myself I never wanna stop
until my mom walks in on me and then I hang my head.

When I touch myself everybody smiles.
When I touch myself everybody laughs.
When I touch myself everybody smiles
'til my mom walks in on me and then I hang my head.

When I touch myself everybody smiles.
When I touch myself everybody laughs.
When I touch myself everybody smiles
'til my mom walks in on me and then I hang my head.

Anything at All Lyrics
Limited Time Only
()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

Let's not forget about the fights we had, it'll make us closer.
We have to fight this, have to mend this, have to heal these broken wings.
And we have to grow apart if it means being happy.

Say anything, anything at all
like, "we can't ignore the steps we took to make this fall."
We're in together through thick and thin.
I don't want to grow apart just to live.

And maybe time will tell if things will ever end up better.
We can't control this, we can't steer this, cannot fix eachother's faults.
And we have to grow apart if it means being happy.

Say anything, anything at all
like, "we can't ignore the steps we took to make this fall."
We're in together through thick and thin.
I don't want to grow apart just to live.
To grow apart to live.

Say anything, anything at all
like, "we can't ignore the steps we took to make this fall."
We're in together through thick and thin.
I don't want to grow apart just to live.
Say anything, anything at all
like, "we can't ignore the steps we took to make this fall."
We're in together through thick and thin.
I don't want to grow apart just to live.
To grow apart to live.

If you go to the above mentioned website, there are a lot more.
 
N

Nimsical

Hi, I'm Nima
I was bored on the subway last night, so I pulled my iPhone out and started writing a short "poem".

Jolly Good | Decryption of the Encrypted

This bizarre feeling, this wicked tide. I feel butterflies in my gut.

I can't feel my innocence as you speak, you are nothing but a stranger to me.

I catch a glimpse of your eyes and my mind remembers all those lies that it lived in for so many years.

My white sheet is scrabbled with dirty thoughts. Theories or hypothesis aside.

I am a man of reality, so I look away and gaze at my tie. 'Cause I will be nothing but a wheezing fly.

If I ever find the courage to open my mouth, I will tell you how I recognized the path.

So jolly good, I have to sneak. Live a long life and rest in peace.

-

I wrote this when I sat in front of an interesting person in the subway.
 
Mr. Beefy

Mr. Beefy

Suck It Trebek
I had a poem due for English last year on someone who had "impacted your life". Naturally I didn't write anything until the day it was due, I scribbled this down in about five minutes and I think it's one of the coolest things I've ever written.

Master Chief is the coolest guy who never lived.

Owning Covenants and Brutes alike
He can run faster than Lance Armstrong on a bike
His vertical is wicked, like an NBA player
You better watch out when he's chargin' his laser

He has a best friend, he is an Elite
Together they are impossible to beat
With Cortana at his side, he sees all
If you are ever in trouble give Chief a call

He crushes little Grunts in one fell swoop
If you don't know who I am talking about you're out of the loop
Me and Master Chief have spent hours together
He's always there for me, even in bad weather

So that's why I like the Chief, he's a cool guy
Saving planet Earth and shooting aliens out of the sky
He never fails, it's not a big deal
Chasing down the bad guys on that big wheel

He is the last Spartan, he's the end
Master Chief is a pretty good friend
We finished the fight and that's what counts
This is the end of my poem so I'm gonna bounce
 
W

Whisper

Logic :(
Mr. Beefy said:
I had a poem due for English last year on someone who had "impacted your life". Naturally I didn't write anything until the day it was due, I scribbled this down in about five minutes and I think it's one of the coolest things I've ever written.

Master Chief is the coolest guy who never lived.

Owning Covenants and Brutes alike
He can run faster than Lance Armstrong on a bike
His vertical is wicked, like an NBA player
You better watch out when he's chargin' his laser

He has a best friend, he is an Elite
Together they are impossible to beat
With Cortana at his side, he sees all
If you are ever in trouble give Chief a call

He crushes little Grunts in one fell swoop
If you don't know who I am talking about you're out of the loop
Me and Master Chief have spent hours together
He's always there for me, even in bad weather

So that's why I like the Chief, he's a cool guy
Saving planet Earth and shooting aliens out of the sky
He never fails, it's not a big deal
Chasing down the bad guys on that big wheel

He is the last Spartan, he's the end
Master Chief is a pretty good friend
We finished the fight and that's what counts
This is the end of my poem so I'm gonna bounce
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What the hell was your grade for that. :laugh:
 
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