you need to use the rule of 3rds for your composition, and use a lot of lighting to make it look good. You say you are trying show the emotion in the lyrics, well first off emotion is impossible to show, you need to narrow it to a specific emotion, if you were to pick depressing, then you would go with a dark composition, with a grungy feeling. If you were to pick a happy emotion, you would go with bright and colorful composition. As for the text/lyrics, you need to have them artistically placed, not just rotated. Something like a gradiented fade using a masking layer, using a font appropriate for the emotion being presented. If you give me more specifics I could help you create more of a base to work off of.
@Vee, eldiablov said what I was going to say, there is nothing in the composition worth keeping or improving. I was just stating that, in a non direct way, if you have a problem with my honest opinion, then deal with it, He asked for opinions, so I provided mine. Lying to him and saying it looks good, like a few others did will not make him a better artist/photoshopper, so when you commented on me not helping even though I know what I am doing was false, as I did help him by not encouraging bad habits.